As someone who routinely calls BS on the trainwrecks you start, here’s the same advice you’ve been offered 899999999 times.
Present your opinion as opinion, not as irrefutable fact.
Clarify the depth and breadth of your experience. The way you’ve gone on tirades about Pergolide veils, for example, one might think you’re a vet with masses of experience with it. Nope, you have one horse, one lengthy episode of care.
[edit]