I think you fit in with the average rider that I see in my region. He is a nice trying horse. I think he could have better gait quality when he finds your hands and knows the acceptance and push.
Focus needs to be on establishing connection to the aids. Work on your proper use of aids to connect in to a quiet, sympathetic hand. Sympathetic hand does not mean a loose sagging rein or open fingers. You can see many times that you are spreading the hands. opening fingers and the reins are not connected to the mouth. It can be surprising how much the weight might feel. He doesn’t know where you are because those loose reins take your communication away. With proper connection to the hand you can take control of his shoulders and get straighter in the canter. The hand connection is core to all the work; the flow the straightness and balance from the complete circle of energy. This can be a very challenging concept for us old hunter riders to get. I feel I had to relearn how to ride when I went from hunter to Dressage in the 80s
You ride very accurate figures which is a huge plus. It is amazing how many points are lost by folks being imprecise .
I dont think, right now, you are showing what a judge would look for in a complete and finished first level horse, which is what you encounter at rated shows. Most horses at rated shows, in first level are training second level at home…
Without a quieter connection, (therefore acceptance of aids ,balance and tempo scores improve) with consistency, I would not show higher, stay at training level for this one perhaps do First one on the last day if you have the option in a Test of Choice class. Understand how tests are judged. Every time there is a lapse within a movement set from letter to letter, the points start sliding. It is not just the core of the figure that is judged but the work leading into and out of it.
Go to the show for fun and learning, you score sheet is your reward
Overall these rides look mid 50s , some might go slightly higher, some might be more severe, I know some judges would have given 4 for many of the movements; lack of balance acceptance and harmony…They expect more from a first level horse. It is not training level with more challenging movements Some would be more accepting at First 1/2 of bobbles, but they would note they come from a core issue.
If you can improve some of the work with a firmer but sympathetic hand to smooth out the flow and obedience/ acceptance, scores should improve a bit. Can you do it with only 2 lessons, that depends on your knowledge set and grit.